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Saturday, July 6, 2013

Reborn


8 comments:

swati1012 said...

I must say that it is awesome! And I like the last line "so the hunter had become the prey"

Aayesha Shahe Anwar Hakim said...

the writing is nice, as usual. mystery surrounds the man well. leads you to the story. well written Rafaa and the tables turning part was unusual, making the writing unique. 'super' natural writing I must say!

Rafaa Dalvi said...

@swati
Thank You :)

Rafaa Dalvi said...

Thank you for your kind words. I don't think this is a unique story. If I was a reader, I would have guessed the end much before but I'm glad that you liked my writing. That means a lot to me :)

swaroop guggilam said...

Awesome yaar :)

saagar said...

Brilliant! As usual, the premise is a little unusual!:) Liked the way the vampire exploded before going on to bite him. A dig at all the fantasy vampire lovey dovey tales?;-)

Rafaa Dalvi said...

Thanks Swaroop

Rafaa Dalvi said...

Finally, someone realized it. I absolutely detest lovey dovey vampire tales. I'm glad you liked it Saagar.

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