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Thursday, June 24, 2010

You're perfect


I have fallen in love with you
I wanna be more than just friends with you
You are like no one I've ever met
To me, you are perfect.


I know that I just recently met you
But I can't help how you have make me feel
I want to be a part of your life
And to stay at your side forever.

I don't know how it happened
And there's nothing I can do about it
I've tried not feeling this way
I wish I knew how to quit you.

And on this day I say to you I love you
No words can describe the way I feel when I’m with you
I never wish to be parted from you from this day on
You’re my only reason to stay alive.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

dramatic. some lines were hyperbole.
and labelled it as EMO?
naah, way too girlie.

Zoya.

zaid said...

man u should confess it today itself......be bold to express ur feelings.....dont be shy....just go for it.dont think bout the consequences....

Zaid.

naquiyah said...

its really nice!! :)

Fatima said...

wow they were nice..!!..
bt felt lyk these emotions suit a girl more..
nyways liked it:)

Dennis said...

Not bad, as a beginner. Poetry is something difficult. And its even more when the topic is love. Its an expression that's very vast to be expressed in words. Poetry works well for a beginner when it comes to confusion. Next time, when you're in a dilemma, write a poem.

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