Thursday, June 24, 2010

You're perfect

I have fallen in love with you
I wanna be more than just friends with you
You are like no one I've ever met
To me, you are perfect.

I know that I just recently met you
But I can't help how you have make me feel
I want to be a part of your life
And to stay at your side forever.

I don't know how it happened
And there's nothing I can do about it
I've tried not feeling this way
I wish I knew how to quit you.

And on this day I say to you I love you
No words can describe the way I feel when I’m with you
I never wish to be parted from you from this day on
You’re my only reason to stay alive.


Anonymous said...

dramatic. some lines were hyperbole.
and labelled it as EMO?
naah, way too girlie.


zaid said...

man u should confess it today bold to express ur feelings.....dont be shy....just go for it.dont think bout the consequences....


naquiyah said...

its really nice!! :)

Fatima said...

wow they were nice..!!..
bt felt lyk these emotions suit a girl more..
nyways liked it:)

Dennis said...

Not bad, as a beginner. Poetry is something difficult. And its even more when the topic is love. Its an expression that's very vast to be expressed in words. Poetry works well for a beginner when it comes to confusion. Next time, when you're in a dilemma, write a poem.

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