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Friday, June 28, 2013

Red

The start of a storm
Months and months of violence
Fiery Red Sky
Peace returns after the war
Drowning hope everywhere




NOTE: Tanka is a Japanese poem consisting of five lines, the first and third of which have five syllables and the others seven.

4 comments:

Aditi said...

Thanks for enlightening me on the concept of 'Tanka'...brilliantly written poem and the pic is complementing it so well!!

Rafaa Dalvi said...

Welcome Aditi :)

Zoya Versey said...

This tanka. Makes one visualize their perspective of storm, violence, war and peace.
A storm is always followed by a lull.

Well written. Really liked it.

Rafaa Dalvi said...

@Zoey

I'm still waiting to read the tanka you promised to write. Your compliments always brings a smile on my face :)

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